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akua12

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Greetings from Ghana.I have made a natural soap which will help treat acne and pimples. Is my design and name good enough to help me sell the product? Suggestions will be much appreciated.thank you

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If you are advertising it as above, you are moving your product from a soap to a drug according to regulations in the United States. I don't know about the regulations in Ghana, but regulations for drugs are much stricter here.
 
Your design is very clean looking, which fits the product. I like the face but I am not crazy about the shape & color of the "Eraser" border. I'd suggest something more elegant to match the lady's fine complexion. I also notice you have a few different fonts, which I find somewhat distracting. I like the font of the bottom two lines best, and not so much the top three lines. You might try using all one font or a maximum of two different fonts -- but make sure they are soft and flowing. They would accent her better that way.

I also think adding color could soften the effect to more closely match the face, though I don't have a specific suggestion.

Where are you planning to sell -- a shop, a market, on-line, or some other way? That, along with info on who you are targeting for your product (for example, age) might help fine tune it. You have a good beginning.
 
a bit off topic, but may i please ask what is the meaning of eraser facial soap?

i like CaraBou's suggestions... i do like the image of the lady's face, but too much different fonts are distracting. stick to 1 or 2 fonts at the most.

have you tried playing with different colors? i dunno why, but the red and fuchsia seem a bit too strong.

you could also list the herbs you are using, instead of only using the word herbs. if i'm a potential customer, i would like to get as much info as i can.
 
Red and Fuchsia should never be used on the same label. And those colors are really harsh against a white background.

I am with the others on the too many fonts. Pick one and stick with it.

Be sure to check your government regulations about making medical claims before using that label.
 
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