Critique my etsy shop?

[FGOriold]

Can the words "instant satisfaction" be used to describe a product?

I am not even sure what that would mean and how you would use it for soap. Can you explain further?

 

[The Efficacious Gentleman]

From the FDA point of view, most likely. From a point of view of making sense of your labeling and marketing.........maybe not

 

[FifthCap]

Oh, i forgot to add, that's for lip balm

 

[FGOriold]

Lip balm is not soap, it is a cosmetic and must follow the cosmetic labeling laws (unless you say anything about healing or treating a medical condtion, then it is a drug).

 

[maya]

Your shop is nice. I have a couple of comments. First, I wouldn't have two unrelated products for sale in the same shop. I.e. jewelry and b + b items. Two for Etsy, the ingredients listings do not matter on the sales page. Its on your product label that all these rules come into effect. So, for Etsy beeswax as the first ingredient is just fine. Many, many, many people do not list their full, proper ingredient list on Etsy (I've heard many reasons, a main one was theft of formulas.)

 

[FifthCap]

Your shop is nice. I have a couple of comments. First, I wouldn't have two unrelated products for sale in the same shop. I.e. jewelry and b + b items. Two for Etsy, the ingredients listings do not matter on the sales page. Its on your product label that all these rules come into effect. So, for Etsy beeswax as the first ingredient is just fine. Many, many, many people do not list their full, proper ingredient list on Etsy (I've heard many reasons, a main one was theft of formulas.)

Yeah, I've wondered about the two different categories making it look like a "Jack of all trades, master of none" kind of deal

 

[FifthCap]

Double post