I used to build websites. I could give you an honest critique if you like, but, with the caveat, that its my opinon based on the sites I built (and sold for a tidy profit) and my experiance in the field.
What that translates to is:
I wont hold back, and you won't like it. Because I have to (as a person) work to find good in things and finding faults is what I do, and its what I did well back when I made websites. Up to you.