@The_Phoenix Glad that you have the energy rn to do boring “housekeeping tasks” like presenting/photographing/sharing your Lollipop results. Some conscentious routine can be a good solace that a normality exists somewhere out there.
I like both swirls a lot. The first has more “surprises” in it (be this a good or bad thing, more or less in agreement with your conception), but I agree that the colours are not the snappiest.
Much better with the second (your third), one sees that you have learned from everything. Having four colours that fit well with each other is difficult, but IMHO you succeeded here! Orange-blue is a well working combination – a bummer that the batters themselves don'like each other (greenish line in between). I imagine this loaf would also look gorgeous when cut vertically.