Are you still looking for feedback on this recipe? It looks good to me. If you wanted to, you could bump the longevity number up by reducing the avocado or olive oil a bit and increasing hard oils high in palmitic and/or stearic acids. For instance, you could increase the Shea, or add a little cocoa butter or some GW415 soy wax. Don’t increase the coconut oil because the number right now is good for what you want.
It looks like you’re making a small amount for testing and or for personal use. Have you made the soap already? If so, have you used it yet? And if so, what do you think of it?