Please forgive, but I was an English major so I thought I'd offer some suggestions for rewriting the front page. If I were a customer, I probably wouldn't buy with the clunky writing.
Get A Free Sample!!
We realize it is hard to determine whether a candle is worthy just by looking on a site, therefore we would like to extend to you a free tealight sample candle of your scent choice! Simply click on the "get a free sample" link, fill out the form, and choose your scent.
Welcome to Total Unity, where you can find high quality homemade candles at a competitive price, with top notch customer service. Here our mission is simple: We strive to listen, connect, and build our site, along with our products, with your feedback. Our candles are made from a soy/paraffin blend to ensure you get a strong scent while maintaining a long burn time. As we grow, so will our candle selection. We also have more products in mind.
We also offer custom candles!. Simply fill out the "contact us" tab and throw us your ideas, and we will do our best to make it a reality. We hope you enjoy the site, and we thank you for visiting us!
We are a new and growing business, so we appreciate all feedback to better our products and provide our customers with the highest quality candles.
Thats exactly what i wanted to hear, i am very new to building a site so your opinion is valued greatly!
