Etsy Shop Name

[MelissaG]

So my normal business name is too long for the 20 digit max allowed on the site and I wanted to devote etsy to a slightly different crowd anyway. Can I get your opinions on the logo please? And yes, I know I'm a terrible artist lol. I asked my niece if she'd turn it into a digital logo for me after I figure out what I want to do and she said yes.

What do you think?

I made 7 of them. Number 2 is a bathtub with bubbles and the name floating on top. Number 3 is a terribly drawn cypress tree with the word bayou sitting on water. Number 4 is just the name floating on bubbles. If you have any other ideas, I'd love to see them. I think my terrible lack of drawing skills is haunting me once again and I can't get anything I see down on paper.

Thank you so much for your help.

 

[CLMP]

I really like number 4 the best.

 

[AliOop]

I’m torn between 3,4, and 6 - so not much help, sorry.

Your drawings are far better than I could make. Still, could you try using AI to create them from your drawing, and see if that gets you closer to what you want? I haven’t tried AI and may not ever do so, but it sounds like others are loving it.

 

[dmcgee5034]

I like number 4. The bubbles floating are super cute. Can you put a couple above, too?
I have bubbles around the goat on my logo, so I’m partial to that look

 

[mx5inpenn]

I like 4 the best.

 

[paradisi]

Number 4 (and I hadn't seen the other responses).

 

[Obsidian]

I also like 4 best

 

[MelissaG]

Thank you everyone. I really appreciate it.

 

[BWt]

Number 4 is fun.

 

[Dan9250]

Number 4

 

[Twig + Forest]

I like #4 best

 

[MelissaG]

My niece sent me a rough copy of number 4 today but she says it's not done with it yet. Check it out. This is completely adorable. The name is bouncy so I wanted the logo to reflect fun and bouncy too. My niece said she wants to add more detail and bubbles and she's going to provide me everything I need, even a social media kit.

 

[Twig + Forest]

My niece sent me a rough copy of number 4 today but she says it's not done with it yet. Check it out. This is completely adorable. The name is bouncy so I wanted the logo to reflect fun and bouncy too. My niece said she wants to add more detail and bubbles and she's going to provide me everything I need, even a social media kit. View attachment 72607

It's looking great

 

[BWt]

My niece sent me a rough copy of number 4 today but she says it's not done with it yet. Check it out. This is completely adorable. The name is bouncy so I wanted the logo to reflect fun and bouncy too. My niece said she wants to add more detail and bubbles and she's going to provide me everything I need, even a social media kit. View attachment 72607

Ohhh this says fun and bubbles in a gorgeous way! Love this.

 

[dmcgee5034]

Your niece is so talented! I love the color palette, how the color is gradient, and those little clusters of bubbles are cute! It really pops (Bubble - Pop, yup I did that LOL) against the black background

 

[MelissaG]

She will love to hear you all love it. She has her own business selling twitch icons and stuff and does very well at it. Most of her stuff has a distinct manga type feel. But it's also cute which is why I thought it would be appropriate for this.

 

[CecileBC]

#4 is looking great !!!

 

[Zany_in_CO]

Instead of Bubble Bayou, which I love, think about "Bubbly Bayou" -- it has a better cadence, both written and spoken. Whichever you choose, it's clever and memorable.

Your niece's design is well done, happy, inviting and tastefully colorful without being overdone. I might rethink the choice of a "baby" color pallet but that's just me. It serves its purpose as is. To me, the "bubbles" are distracting -- the eye is drawn to them. I would skip them all together. They add nothing substantive to the design except "cuteness" -- if that is what you want, go for it.

Without knowing how this is going to be used, I think just using the name needs some clarification to follow as soon as possible -- something along the lines of "Handcrafted Bath & Body Products" or similar, to let shoppers know you sell more than just soap. Remember "Bath & Body Shop"? That says it all, and that's what I'm getting at. When you name a shop to represent a product, if the product isn't in the name, then you need to choose wisely to find something that does.

 

[basti]

Your niece's design is well done, happy, inviting and tastefully colorful without being overdone. I might rethink the choice of a "baby" color pallet but that's just me. It serves its purpose as is. To me, the "bubbles" are distracting -- the eye is drawn to them. I would skip them all together. They add nothing substantive to the design except "cuteness" -- if that is what you want, go for it.

From my understanding, Melissa is trying to appeal to a younger audience/parents for her Etsy shop.

My niece sent me a rough copy of number 4 today but she says it's not done with it yet. Check it out. This is completely adorable. The name is bouncy so I wanted the logo to reflect fun and bouncy too. My niece said she wants to add more detail and bubbles and she's going to provide me everything I need, even a social media kit.
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She will love to hear you all love it. She has her own business selling twitch icons and stuff and does very well at it. Most of her stuff has a distinct manga type feel. But it's also cute which is why I thought it would be appropriate for this.

The rough draft looks really nice and I bet the final version will be even nicer! Glad to see you supporting your talented niece's graphic design skills

 

[Zany_in_CO]

From my understanding, Melissa is trying to appeal to a younger audience/parents for her Etsy shop.

Good catch... Makes perfect sense now... Thanks for pointing that out.