Looks good and as far as the smudgy swirls go, of course it acceptable. Handmade soap isn't perfect and you never really know whats going to be inside. That said, I don't care much for hanger swirls myself, I prefer a more variable look from a drop swirl or in the pot swirl.
Don't worry about uneven bars either. Its just another facet of being handmade. You should see what my soap looks like if I don't use a guide, its terrible.