For us to give you good feedback on your recipe, we will need to see the percentages of each ingredient or the weight in grams or ounces of each ingredient. Right now you just have a list of ingredients so it's hard to say if your recipe will be good or not. I see a lot of ingredients that you probably don't need for a good bar of soap. I think it's best to keep it simple, especially if you are new to soapmaking.
Coconut oil - best used in a percentage of 20% - too much coconut oil will be drying on the skin.
NaOH - obviously needed!
Water - obviously needed!
Olive oil - a key soapmaking ingredient. It can be used up to 100% in your recipe. But a lot of olive oil can make the soap feel "slimey" or "gooey".
Stearic acid - not needed in cold-process soap. It can speed up trace quickly because it reacts with the lye so fast.
Propylene glycol - this is an ingredient used in Melt and Pour soap, NOT cold/hot process soap.
Glycerin - Normally not used in cold/hot-process soap. It is a byproduct produced by the soapmaking process itself. It can be added to hot process soap as a superfat to add more glide.
Syrup - Using sugar and syrups in small amounts can increase bubbles. Use no more than 1 tablespoon per pound of oils.
Fragrant Snappy - Not sure what this is. Can you provide a link?
Extract pure swallow - Not sure what this is. Can you provide a link?
Jojoba - jojoba oil is more of a wax than an oil, so it can behave strangely in cold process soap. You can try it in a small percentage, maybe 10% to see if you like it.
I would try a recipe like this:
70% Olive Oil
20% Coconut Oil
10% Jojoba Oil
35% Lye Concentration
5% Superfat
You would put these percentages into a Soap Calculator to determine how much water, lye, and oils to use. I like to use Soapee.com.
Do you have access to lard, tallow, palm oil and castor oil?