That looks better! But.. I will be honest, that bar would be way too cleansing for me. I try to keep my cleansing number at 12 or lower, since "cleansing" on the
soap calculator refers to how much of your skin's oil it will strip off.
People tend to want to use lots of coconut oil to get lots of bubbles, but unlike raw coconut oil (which some folks use as a moisturizer), saponified CO in soap is very drying to the skin. So I'd reduce the CO to 20% max, and put the other 5% into something like shea butter.
Even with less CO, there are ways to get more bubbles. The easiest one for a beginner is to dissolve some plain sugar (organic or regular is fine) in your batch water before you add the lye to it. A good starting point for that is 1 T for each pound of oils, or 2% of total oil weight if you prefer to measure it that way. Other people choose to use aloe vera juice instead of distilled water, which is even easier since no dissolving or measuring is required! Just know that the bubble action from sugar or AVJ doesn't show up in the
soap calculator numbers. You simply must trust us when we say that it does work!
Sorry, I do have one last recommendation if you can stand it.
Consider changing your water measurement from "
liquid as percent of oils" to "
lye concentration." That will give you more consistent results as you make different-sized batches with different types of oils. A good starting place for CP soap is 33% lye concentration. Then you also don't have to faff around with so-called water discounts - you just raise or lower the concentration to decrease or increase the amount of water.